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Getting It Right by Susan Stevens She was so earnest, and so moonstruck: What stalled in her mind as she roamed streets with such resolve that I believed her motion had meaning? Letting her lucid times construe all the rest, I would bring sense to her forgetting one instant in the next. The grief of this lie is as heavy as hearing you read in verse about the connectedness of all things, how everything relates—demonically, almost. The trouble this gives you sets up networks of memory in me, connections, remembering one who has lost her power to hook up to anything for very long. The staccato of your words comes at me like shrapnel; leaving the room as you read is like refusing to cry. Again I think of a woman whose steel-trap mind for precepts misses daily connections. Yet for you, dear careful poet, the sense lies in unfastening; the way your poem makes it clear ought to guarantee a perfect working of things if only the right person were to listen.